I am posting the essay BECAUSE I think that the highlighted part at the end of the REPORT correctly shows - exactly what I want you to do - to make connections between DISCONNECTED strands of thought. The Report has a number of errors in DICTION and Sentence Structure - BUT the essay makes this ONE message clear. So, I chose it. This is Rashif's Essay.
Shahidul Mamun
Sir,
Today’s first essay was Samba e Choro. It is
narrated by a man who went to Brazil after a break up for redemption. As soon
as he set his foot in Brazil’ he started hating it. It was raining constantly
for days and he did not like that in any way. Then one night out of pure
despair he set off to go to a downtown nightclub. Then through his car journey
he portrayed the scenery of the part of Brazil he was in. He then tells us that
soon he started appreciating Brazil and ended up living there for two more years.
The part of Brazil he was in is southern Rio.
He praises all of Rio and the development it had in the two years he was there.
It was a very lively town where he was and apparently everyday was a Sunday. He
thought so highly of Rio that he soon goes on to say that the reason for
Brazil’s development was Rio and that Rio was pulling Brazil forward. He felt
that Rio was in itself beautiful and he loved the beaches and the people there.
The second essay I read was a much shorter
essay than the first but this one I liked better. It is named On Waking from a
Dream. The fact which I loved about it was again the platforms the author was
setting for what he was going to say next and the unpredictability of it.
The essay started with a man and woman in a
hospital with their son. They had been there for a week because of the son's illness.
After he was brought home he didn’t want to take his meds and despite trying
multiple times, the parents failed to convince him. Then they went to sleep and
the man had a dream; he only remembered the last part of it. He saw a lizard
running between two rocks and disappearing into the earth. He also remembered
seeing the letters SIDA. Soon he started getting annoyed that he could not
remember what his dream was especially because of the fact that he was a
psychoanalyst and this was not supposed to happen to him.
He goes on to do what he would do with his
patients if they were going through something like this. He tried to note down
everything that came to his mind when he focused and soon he remembered that
SIDA was that Spanish for AIDS and one of his patients had Aid and refused to
take medicines. The man tried to convince the patient into taking his meds but
he did not concur. The patient soon decided that he would go to Brazil and he died
there. The man then figured out his dream. It was his child’s reluctance to
take meds that brought it about. The fact that if his child didn’t take meds he
would end up deep inside the earth is what the lizard disappearing signified
was now clear to him.
I appreciated the second essay a lot. The fact
that all these random things were linked up together mesmerized me. The
psychoanalyst figuring it all out and writing about it seemed very impressive
to me. Suddenly I thought of the psychoanalysis discussion classes with you and
the link it had with improving our writing and thinking. That’s all for now!
Thank you,
Rashif
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